Hi Gary & Susie,
Top panels and camber - My intuition and my experience with mehitabel convince me that your top 3 panels would develop a lovely smooth and powerful fanned camber if cut flat. If each of those three panels has camber built in, I humbly suggest that the smooth shape of fanned camber and its effectiveness will be hurt by dips and bumps, especially when reefed down to 3 or 4 panels. Other opinions exist, though.
Structurally, tight flat sailcloth distributes strain; easing panels out with built-in camber concentrates strain in spars and edges. In the top part of the sail, I'm happiest with flat panels.
Yard weight - I question altogether the need for lightness in yards. I want ours to lay down when the halyard is let go, and to be bomb-proof against the varying forces when raised up. With 5:1 halyards, I think you may be frustrated getting yours to fall obediently. In tough weather, reefed, the weight of a yard is low, yes? A place to overbuild for confidence, rather than tweak a few kilos for any reason, I think.
Yard length - The shortness of your yards is, in my opinion, an aesthetic success but perhaps a structural mistake, in that it transfers compression (and other yard forces - these things don't sit still up there!) to the top battens, and adds tension to the leech of the top panel. Mehitabel's top batten is two battens. Just an idea.
Sheeting - I've come to appreciate the anti-twist 2-point and equal-power 3-point spans described in PJR chapter 4, in our rig. I can't tell from your drawings if you have ample drift to the deck, but it's important, whatever sheetlets are used. Sheeting points and height of the clew above deck deserve a lot of refining effort, I reckon. You've probably made sure of the clearances... yeah, I probably didn't need to bring it up.
It's a beautiful-looking plan, with some visual relief from the sheet-of-plywood effect some of us sail around with. She'll be great.
Cheers,
Kurt