Hi Daniel,
Pockets - If I'd spent the time it took to hammer in a couple hundred grommets thinking instead about how to make batten pockets work as well, and then spent the time it took to lash battens through grommets implementing the ideas, we'd have really good pockets. As it is, we have very-high-quality cable ties...
There are other people who can help you with pocket details.
Construction - I looked out on the brand-new flat vertically-seamed acre of fabric, big enough for the parellelogram portion of our sail, on the firehall floor. Let's see... we could cut it up into individual panels and sew them back together with horizontal seams and batten strips, or... we could roll it up and master getting it through the sewing machine.
For a flat sail and easy-working fabric like Top Gun or Odyssey, the latter was a clear choice. Even if someone could now point and show me the bad effect of not rounding .5% between panels, I wouldn't cut the sail apart to put it in. This is soft fabric, not thin plywood!
(Cambered panels, they say, deserve such cutting and sewing, cutting and sewing...)
After that, and the one awkward seam to the top section, it was all perimeter work. (I've only made 2 junk sails and a few Bermudian ones, on a beefed-up household sewing machine. Others have made heaps more.)
Upper panels - aerodynamic advantage question... - No.
In mehitabel's flat sail article, there's a profile sail-plan photo, and the text also describes what departures I made from Hasler & McLeod's plan. And what I'd do next time. (I have a mehitabel sail-plan equivalent to PJR Fig.6.34, in terms of B & P & U and so on, if you're interested.)
I do like the result of my not-so-original changes. I would use slightly higher 'fan' angles, as the article says, if I were making your sails, which I'm not. Creative fine-tuning and invention are your fun.
Our top batten is sometimes sheeted; I keep the sheet-end in the deck block with a stopper knot, ready to be hitched to the top batten, but we sail without sheeting it most of the time.
In a supersonic aircraft association, we'd have to be more careful what we say.
Cheers,
Kurt